here i am
back again
heard that before?
thought so
dig dig dig
for some sort of emotion-
everyone seems to have forgotten about it.
its gotten back
to midnight scribblings
and poetry.
crap.
whore?
- yes, there there
no wonder youve stopped caring.
too perfect.
yes, it is night time
so ill sit naked
and write
the code to my zeitgeist
that none of you will really get.
havent done this in a while - sorry
the book is back, guys...















Comments
also, that last line could sound and look really good if you changed "guys" to "boys." a little alliteration for emphasis, perhaps. On the other hand, "guys" works for both sexes, which could be what you were going for.
anyway, good job and keep it up!
peace.
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I would rather live consistently for what I believe to be true and be wrong, than live for nothing and be not right.
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